Elevator Pitch No. 3

The Pitch: 

G.R.E.E.N.

(Green Research in Ecologically Enhancing Networks) 

 My idea is to create a company in which produces green products that can combine your everyday necessities with green concepts hence the name G.R.E.E.N. meaning Green Research in Ecologically Enhancing Networks.  We would use environmentally friendly resources that are both cheap and easily recyclable or biodegradable such as Aluminum for metal and biodegradable polymers for filters, packaging, you name it. For our first concept we would like to introduce the Potter Spotter (name in pending) which will make use of your phone and any type of plant you may have. The phone would be placed on an adjustable platform that would connect to an aluminum container with enclosed water and the plant placed right under it. Now instead of forgetting where you place your phone and having no place to put your phone when your studying or going to sleep you can place it on the Potter Spotter (name in pending). When your phone vibrates for whatever alarms you set, the vibrations will navigate through the aluminum bars and shake the canister full of water which will cause the water inside to drip through the biodegradable filter and water your plant. This is just a beginning design an will surely improve as will others green concepts.  

The container with the water will have a device that limits he water output to prevent the plant from drowning. I was also given the idea so that the phone can have a speaker on the device so it will have more uses and more people would consider using it.

~Need to know that your phone will not be close enough to the water so get wet and the water will not be touching the phone unless you put your phone directly where the plant should be. Which is on the consumer.

Here's the original design template:

Feedback reflection from last pitch:

Feedback that I was given from the last pitch was to talk slower, to not sound as choppy, and to explain more about the product. Ideas were also given such as a place to charge the phone or to play music. I also talked about how the phone would be safe from the water and the phone will not be harmed unless the consumer does the harm themselves. I also explained how the water would be prevented from being used too much by talking about a device in pending that would prevent a certain output of water.

What did you change, based on feedback?

I was able to talk slower and sound a little less choppy. I also explained how the phone would be safe and the simplicity of my product in the pitch and left the explaining in-depth on the blog so I wouldn't be making a 5 minute pitch.

A link to my previous pitch (very nice description of my pitch): http://thisisnotawkward.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html#comment-form 

A link to my idea napkin to help explain the idea: http://thisisnotawkward.blogspot.com/2016/03/idea-napkin-no-2.html#comment-form